The ProtoType Avenger

[Red_Raven]

Anyway, im gonna REpost 9 and 10 for fyber on todays update.

[Red_Raven]

Heres #11 for todays update Fyber.

[FyberOptic]

Nice going on the layout, it fits perdy good now!

[Red_Raven]

Heres, #12

[Red_Raven]

Here is #13

[Altzan]

Anyone else notice that blue guy sneaking around all four panels?

[Shadow]

Its Megaman

[Prox]

NO ITS THAT GUY FROM WAYNE'S WORLD

[Armchair]

I spy with my little eye... 4 typos.

[Prox]

Well, I spy more than 4. I thinks I'll just help out a little and fix it all.

Panel 1: Tell me something. How did you get a hold of these files?
Panel 2: From his lab. See, I'm one of his robots, so I get to run around all day. Sometimes I take a sneak peek at some of his newest creations.
Panel 3: What's odd is that I never even saw Dr. Wily build those robots.
Panel 4: That's because he stole them from me.

Even with all the "misstatements" fixed, the comic is still full of inconstistencies and errors.

[FyberOptic]

While the other corrections are true, how do you figure "ahold" should be "a hold"?  I looked it up in dictionary dot corn to make sure I wasn't just some dumb hick using a word wrong, but it seems to corroborate the usage here, unless there's some grammatical thing I'm missing.

[Red_Raven]

well, I have an idea on how to stop the mistakes, i'll probably make the text bright green to actaully see what im writing then make it black then into a word bubble.

[Prox]

While the other corrections are true, how do you figure "ahold" should be "a hold"?  I looked it up in dictionary dot corn to make sure I wasn't just some dumb hick using a word wrong, but it seems to corroborate the usage here, unless there's some grammatical thing I'm missing.

I just always read it as "a hold" in books and magazines but i guess whatever works, works.

[Red_Raven]

#14 is here.

[Red_Raven]

#15

Sweet a bed! You never see those anymore!